It’s Sunday. That means we have a winner for the second #SSC and a brand new challenge to build those writing muscles!
The winner for the second Scribbles on Cocktail Napkins Sunday Scribble Challenge is Julianne Hildebrand Winter (J.H. Winter). Julianne is a fantasy writer geared toward Middle Grade and Young Adult readers, and the author of Ink and Stitches: The Writerly and Creative Life of J.H. Winter.
The prompt for that week?
Your character is a villain. Your goal this week is to get your reader to root for him or her in as few words as possible.
The brilliant Julianne’s winning submission:
I wasn’t born this way…I was MADE this way. Words hurt and I wouldn’t let them hurt me anymore. I know they say let sleeping dogs lie, but Grawk was hungry for blood, and I didn’t have the strength to stop him from attaining his meal.
“Oops,” I muttered, as my fingers pulled the final pin keeping him tethered to the earth. “He’ll be back when he’s had his fill.”
I closed my eyes, arms splayed to the sides, as the feeling of wind pushing past my face in wing-beats, signaled the end to my torment and the beginning of something beautiful.
Thank you for participating in the challenge, J. H.! I’d like to invite you and/or your work to be featured in an upcoming post on Scribbles on Cocktail Napkins. This can be done in whatever way you like. A reblog, a guest blog, a new interview about a favorite project, or even a small sample of your latest book along with a purchasing link. You decide!
Now, without any further ado, let’s get to our next Scribble Challenge!! Here’s the new prompt:
The Rules: You have six days to ruminate if you need them. Post one submission to the prompt in the comment section below. The deadline? Saturday, April 23rd @noon Atlantic Daylight Time.
- Encourage other Scribblers. Try to comment (reply) to at least three other submissions during the week.
- After the deadline, VOTE for your favorite submission by emailing: Sundayscribblechallenge@gmail.com. Place the lucky author’s name in the HEADER of your email.
*Remember:
Voting polls for this challenge OPEN immediately after the prompt deadline on April 23rd, and CLOSE one week later, on April 30th. That means the winner of THIS challenge won’t be announced until Sunday, May 1st, when the sixth challenge prompt is posted.
VOTE FOR LAST WEEK’S CHALLENGE!! EMAIL YOUR VOTES TO Sundayscribblechallenge@gmail.com.
Trolls will be escorted back to their bridge with a flaming stick of dynamite.
What a nice surprise to see, when I opened up my email! Thank you so much everyone for the votes! This was my favorite one to write so far (although I’ve enjoyed all of them). Apparently reaching into my darker side comes up with some fun results! 🙂
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Congrats! 🙂
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Thank you, Jackie!
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Your submission was great, J. H.
The past few weeks your enthusiasm for the challenges, along with your Facebook posts and tweets, have been a big part of expanding the talent pool competing in the Sunday Scribble Challenges.
Thank you, and congrats again!
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Of course! I love your challenge so much, I have to share it so more people know about it too. Even if that does mean, the competition gets steeper. 😛 Just pushes me to write even better!
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I sat in the cool grass, beneath the cloaking shade of a willow tree. No doubt, they would all be searching for me by now. Expectations were high and I wasn’t sure I was the girl to bring about the change they were speaking of. I mean, who was I really? The daughter of a metalsmith? The one who preferred the company of a forge to the words of men? I wasn’t cut out for the business of marriage, let alone to someone I didn’t even know. When the prince had set eyes on me that day, though, his mind was set, and my future was set with it. I could run, but knew running would get me nowhere but alone. No. I stood up and felt the breeze of change tingle across my arms and through my elven, auburn hair. I would stand with him. I would see this land brought into a better age, for any good man is only as good as the woman who whispers into his ear at night.
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Excellent! little red headed elven person. I loved ‘the breeze of change tingling across my arms’ you bought the scene alive good luck. * stops off muttering* ” Bar raised again”.
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This one made me literally laugh out loud! As always, thank you for your comment, and for making me blush. 🙂
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Your welcome.
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Pink cheeks are youthful. 😇
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“I would see this land brought into a better age, for any good man is only as good as the woman who whispers into his ear at night.”
–Loved this line!
You laid the foundation of a great story here. Not only that, but you handled the task of instilling an emotional investment in your reader extraordinarily well! I have a feeling your character is going to kick some serious @$$ in the name of that “better age.”
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You’ve got that right! 🙂
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Voting polls for the fourth challenge are now open!
Just place the name of the author who wrote your favorite submission in the header of an email to: SundayScribbleChallenge@gmail.com.
Don’t forget to join us for this week’s SIX WORD STORY challenge!
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Congratulations Julianne! Great job. @sheilamgood at Cow Pasture Chronicles
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Thank you, Sheila! It was a pleasant surprise 🙂
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“Are you the same woman who confronted me in the middle of River City Medical Center? Are you that woman? Look deep inside, Ari,” Millie interrupted. “When you opposed me about Sydney, you weren’t thinking about how you couldn’t do it… you were fighting for what you knew what right. That didn’t disappear. You’re a riser, Ari. You will not only survive, you will thrive. Believe in yourself.”
Arianne considered the words. How could Millie be so sure? How could she know? Looking down, she caught a glimpse of the crucifix resting next to her heart and found the answer herself. Faith.
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The word choices you’ve used to create an emotional investment in your reader were incredibly well selected.
“You’re a riser, Ari. You will not only survive, you will thrive. Believe in yourself.”
I know I’m definitely rooting for your character. Great job with this challenge.
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Voting polls for the fourth challenge are now open!
Just place the name of the author who wrote your favorite submission in the header of an email to: SundayScribbleChallenge@gmail.com.
Don’t forget to join us for this week’s SIX WORD STORY challenge!
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Uhoh! I wondered why i never heard…. my entry dissapeared? Now there is a bugger! Note for later ‘ Dont post on Android, go upstairs and use your lap top!”*grrrrr*
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